Wednesday 14 March 2012

The Masterpiece


She was pushed into the train compartment along with the rush. A bunch of men in the compartment made way for her. A woman in a men’s compartment in a Mumbai local train makes all the men surrounding her bit uncomfortable. They all tried to make way for her to reach the lesser crowded part of the bogie. She was holding a man by his elbow and was pulling him through the crowd. This man was cursing her in some choicest swearwords. The other men in the compartment exchanged looks with each other and remained silent, for even God does not interfere in matters between a man and his wife. She remained silent walked along with her head a little bowed, eyes avoiding a thousand glares raining upon her at the moment.

Finding an empty seat, she lowered the man into it. The man, with unkempt hair, salt and pepper colour beard and a dazed look in his eyes sat down and was quiet for a minute or so. Then the ranting began again. Even the woman’s parents weren’t spared. The woman, in her early thirties bore all this silently without as much a word to make her husband shut up. He started to tell his neighbours how idiotic his wife was... the neighbour nodded and looked questioningly at the woman.”He is ill”, came the soft reply. Some men took pity on the poor woman and gave her a seat next to her mentally deranged husband. Holding his hand firmly in her own, she closed her eyes and rested her forehead on the window grill. 

She had fulfilled all her duties as a girl-child in an orthodox home, as a sister, as a wife, as a mother yet life just wasn’t in a mood to let her go. She bore all this silently, as she was taught. Her once black hair had a few threads of white... her taut face was wrinkled, she looked prematurely old. From her tired-looking eyes, her weary demeanor, lack of interest in her husband’s swearwords and dry parched lips, and a few wispy hair falling on to her sides of her face  she looked as though she had lost the battle with her life... but the firm claw-like grip on her husband’s hand showed otherwise... she was indeed a woman!

It is only a woman who can sacrifice her schooling so that her brother can get university education...It is only a woman who can gives up a place and the people she lived and loved for twenty odd years for a new family of her husband...It is only a woman who can avoid friendships with men as to avoid unnecessary obnoxious comments from the orthodox society...It is only a woman who can bear her husband’s abuses and still long for his love and take care of him... It is only a woman who takes the insults of how tasteless her cooking is and still cooks the next day... It is only a woman who can take a blame for something which wasn’t her fault and silently bear the consequences...It is only a woman who can give birth to “men”...

God might have created Man before he created Woman, but then there is always a rough draft before the masterpiece!

6 comments:

  1. Nice blog.... deep thoughts.....u r really a good writer....

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  2. Man...This is one kind of dedication to a woman...The reason for our existence, i am proud of u that u too are a pro-feminist! keep up the work

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  3. Good post, that celebrates womanhood. Is is a woman who can put up with all this, I agree; but I also feel it is the society [society=us, us=both men and other women] who push women to the brink of difficulties. I so wish there comes a day when women can freely walk without fearing an ogle, make their choices in life - education, partner etc, stand up for themselves without fearing the dogma. That is the day we need to look forward to and that would be the woman we will celebrate.

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  5. very well written Rohit. The way you describe and build the whole scene is phenomenal. The script, written in the way that you did, plays itself right in front of the eyes, which is a very difficult thing for a writer to do. Good job.;-)

    As far as the story is concerned, it sincerely describes the defeat of women in our society. It makes manhood rightly feel unjust and subconsciously discriminating against women. But ironically, it also kinda makes women feel good about their sacrificing nature and defeatism, which in a way, is more like treating the symptom than the disease itself. Just a thought;-)

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